I played the game and thought it was pretty nifty. The artistic and creative aspects such as the art, sprites, and story were great. The music used conveys a nice atmosphere despite the gloominess of it all too. I admit that the grammar on certain dialogue and narration was a bit hard to understand though. And, personally, I think the length of the game isn't enough to really explore the story and characters. The concept of disappearing people and memories is great, but the short time frame sort of hinders it. I hope it can be expanded in the future as I know this was for a contest and all. Those are really the only major problems that I would pinpoint. Other than that, great job! I'm absolutely in love with the aesthetics and creativity of this game.